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Blades, they do gleam,
As raised to the sun, they are
Each with a dangerous sheen,
Each dealing mortal harm

Bane crouches low,
And watches Nemesis from hooded eyes,
While Nemesis's flaming sword,
Breathes fire unto the skies

They move, both at the same time,
Steel rings upon steel, an almost holy chime
The clash can be heard many, many miles around,
Each seeks to drive the other to the ground

Nemesis may be immortal,
Yet Bane's sword, his life can take,
While his own burning brand,
Has caused a million swords to break

With a cry!
They both do engage
Bane tries!
To withstand Nemesis's rage

Further and further,
Back Nemesis forces Bane
His mind screams "Attack!",
So that victory, he can claim

But Bane has a secret,
That Nemesis knows not,
He can unleash a storm of steel,
And unaware, Nemesis will be caught

Bane is all but beaten,
Nemesis has driven him to his knees,
But then Bane screams in defiance,
And that storm of steel is unleashed

Arrows, arrows,
Arrows by the score,
All flying through the air,
So pristine, so pure

For a moment, Nemesis is confused,
A moment is all Bane needs,
And he lunges forward with all he has,
And Nemesis's arm, he does cleave

Nemesis roars!
In anger and pain
And in that instant,
Settles onto the plain
His face full of shocked realization,
As his body ignites in flames

He tries to rise,
But he cannot,
Bane's sword, it reaches,
And leaves behind deep cuts
Off balance, and bewildered,
Nemesis throws his arms up

Nemesis falls!
And lays upon the land
He is defeated!
By the chicanery of man
Weakly, so weakly,
He attempts again to stand

But Bane,
Will not be denied!
This is the end,
For which he has strived!

His sword tears into his enemy's throat,
And he watches Nemesis die

All the hosts of heaven,
They do raise an unholy cry

jlp December 7, 2010
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"Storms of Steel", part 7- "A Storm of Steel"

It's been a year now since I first began "Storms of Steel", and the journey is not yet done.

The battle may be lost, but the war is not yet over.

Part 1-"Onslaught" [link]
Part 2-"The Death of Angels" [link]
Part 3-"A Darkness Across the Land" [link]
Part 4-"The Bane of Heaven" [link]
Part 5-"The Earth Herself Shall Weep" [link]
Part 6- "Choosers of the Slain" [link]

You'd not believe the fun I'm having writing this. :heart:

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~Argentum-Silva Aug 22, 2011  Student General Artist
:3 I'm going to have to read the other 6 now! Dang, you really have a gift when it comes to writing!
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Sep 15, 2011  Professional Writer
:giggle:
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~Argentum-Silva Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
:3
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~Nicksnum1 Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Like! I like this very much
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jul 2, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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Christ.
you never cease to amaze me.

everyone says they have a muse or a gift, but you don't. cuz a gift can be taken away, but this....this is you. (:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 17, 2011  Professional Writer
:blush: :iconmeltplz:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 17, 2011  Professional Writer
:noes:
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Mood: Awestruck ~fernalin Jan 3, 2011   General Artist
awsome !
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