deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
HTML, 1.7 KB
more ▶

More from *That-Krimzon-Stain

Featured in Groups:

Details

December 6, 2008
1.7 KB
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 59
Favourites: 49 [who?]

Views: 722 (0 today)
Downloads: 8 (0 today)
[x]
I am learning,
That with you there is no half-way
It's a small price to pay,
For this feeling in my veins
Searing deep inside me,
Such passionate pain
Tearing,
And scaring,
All I was away...

You ask me if it's forever,
And I tell you that I would never,
Let you go
My mind is reeling from the flame,
That you cause in me everyday
Let you go?
There's just no way...

I remember asking,
You what love was
And you said that it is something,
You can never get enough of
That feeling in your veins,
The burning never goes away
Tearing,
And scaring,
All you were away...

You ask me if it's forever,
And I tell you that I would never,
Let you go
My mind is reeling from the flame,
That you cause in me everyday
Let you go?
There's just no way...

I am lost...
In you!
Inside me...
The feeling burns for you!
Letting you go,
Is something I just can't do!
No, never!

You ask me if it's true...
Forever?
I say that my heart is all for you,
And my blood will bear the proof
I am so light upon my feet,
I am feeling so complete
You ask me if it's forever,
And I tell you that I would never,
Let you go
My mind is reeling from the flame,
That you cause in me everyday
Let you go?
There's just no way...!
You burn inside me,
Driving me down to my knees!
And everything tastes!
So sweet!

jlp December 6, 2008-Revised April 4, 2011
:iconthat-krimzon-stain:
This is a piece I have been working on for a while, the arangement of the words got rather vexing at times. :XD:

My love sears through me, makes me feel alive.
How does yours make you feel?
:heart:

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
Add a Comment:
 
love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconjdepp101:
~jdepp101 Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
veryyyyy nice job!!
Reply
:iconthat-krimzon-stain:
*That-Krimzon-Stain Apr 13, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you. :)
Reply
:iconpeaceandprotocol:
:love:
It makes me happy.:)
Love is a raw, amazing feeling.:huggle:

Let you go?
Krimmeh, 'there's just no way...' :heart:
Reply
:iconthat-krimzon-stain:
*That-Krimzon-Stain Aug 9, 2010  Professional Writer
:iconmeltplz:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:iconiloveyouplz:!!!

(DITTO:heart:)
Reply
:iconpeaceandprotocol:
:heart:
You've gotta stop melting, silleh; my arms are getting sore from putting you back together.:XD:
:huggle:
Reply
:iconthat-krimzon-stain:
*That-Krimzon-Stain Aug 9, 2010  Professional Writer
AH NO CANNA HEP IT KEPTEN!!!
Reply
:iconpeaceandprotocol:
:XD:Then I'll just keep putting you back together.:heart:
Reply
:iconkitty-kitty-kit-kat:
~Kitty-Kitty-Kit-Kat Jan 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
these lyrics together with a guitar and drum rhythm could make a great song! love it
Reply
Add a Comment: