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In that moment...
Between love and hate,
When everything just fades away
In that moment...
Between passion and pain,
Between secrets and shame
In that moment...
Between tomorrow and today...
Lies silence...
       (silence)
        (silence)

Have you ever...
Looked deep into her eyes,
Fallen into the abyss,
Before you realized,
That you were lost in the silence?

(Just listen to...the silence...)

I have heard that silence means,
The absence of sound,
But if this is true,
Then tell me,
Why is it so loud,
And why does it drown...?

In that moment...
Between love and hate,
When everything just fades away
In that moment...
Between passion and pain,
Between secrets and shame
In that moment...
Between tomorrow and today...
Lies silence...
       (silence)
        (silence)

Just listen to the silence!
You can hear so many things!
Words that you're not speaking,
Answers you're not seeking,
Desire encroaching,
Silence taking...everything...

(Just listen to...the silence...)

I have heard that silence means,
The absence of sound,
But if this is true,
Then tell me,
Why is it so loud,
And why does it drown..?

In that moment...
Between love and hate,
When everything just fades away
In that moment...
Between passion and pain,
Between secrets and shame
In that moment...
Between tomorrow and today...
Lies silence...
       (silence)
        (silence)

(Just listen to...the silence...)

Sometimes words are useless,
Much like over-used excuses
Sometimes, you just have to do it,
Listen to the silence...

jlp October 28, 2008-Revised January 7, 2012
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Those awkward moments, when no-one speaks and you can hear a pin drop across the room?

Those are the moments that say the most, you just aren't listening.

Listen to the silence.
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1-7-12: Rewrote chorus, I've always felt it could have said much more than it did, it's only taken me 3 1/2 years to figure out exactly what that was. :B
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~Golden-Leaves Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"I have heard that silence means,
The absence of sound,
But if this is true,
Then tell me,
Why is it so loud,
And why does it drown...?"

Brilliant.
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 10, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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Hm, most people do think silence is very awkward, so they try to fill it with nonsense! Would it not be good if people got better at dealing with silence? Just accept it?

I like this even more than your other poem about silence. I really don't know why. Perhaps because I can relate more to this one.
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 10, 2012  Professional Writer
This one has more of an edge to it, I feel. :nod:
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!finbleach93 Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
man i thought if you´d make this sound like some shit from linkin park´s hybrid theory and post to youtube it would be pretty cool
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 8, 2012  Professional Writer
:w00t:
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:iconlovethebroken:
Absolutely love this <3
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Mood: Love *That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 7, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you very much. :) :heart:
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:iconlovethebroken:
You're welcome :)
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~ERbear26 Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very very nice
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