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After this passage of time,
I found I couldn't change you,
Just like I couldn't change the tides...
I wish that,
I could,
Hit...rewind...
But since I can't do that,
I'll settle for getting you,
Out of my mind

You say it's not me,
But I don't agree

I wish that I could let it go!
Let it go and let it die,
Forever...
And I know it shows!
I know it shows when I cry,
Because life has become never...
I just wish I could hit rewind,
And go back to the time...
when you loved me...

Harsh words...
Some spoken aloud,
Some...left unsaid...
I wish that,
I could,
Leave you for dead!
But since I can't do that,
I'll just turn...
And walk away instead...

You say it's not me,
But I don't agree

I wish that I could let it go!
Let it go and let it die,
Forever...
And I know it shows!
I know it shows when I cry,
Because life has become never...
I just wish I could hit rewind,
And go back to the time...
when you loved me...

Life...
Goes on...
Even when...
You're alone...
And there is no way to rewind it

You say it's not me,
But I don't agree...!

No! I don't agree!

I wish that I could let it go!
Let it go and let it die,
Forever...
And I know that it shows!
I know it shows when I cry,
Because life has become never...
I just wish I could hit rewind,
And go back to the time...
when you loved me...

Do you even think of me...?

jlp july 17, 2009
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The theme is "losing a dear/close friend", suggested by ~KearaClearwater

Enjoy. :) :heart:
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:iconswmnyin:
I really enjoy this theme that you've written about, once before. This really does express the feelings I'm sure we've all felt before at some point in our lives. :heart:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jul 22, 2009  Professional Writer
Very true, :nod:
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:iconswmnyin:
That's one thing that I love about your writing. It's something anyone could relate to. :heart:
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~Malandante Jul 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I think I am going to cry, this is amazing.
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jul 22, 2009  Professional Writer
:blush: Thank you. :)
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~Malandante Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Your always most welcome :hug:
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i don't wish i had a rewind button.
i wish i had a fast forward one.

beautifully written as always. :heart:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jul 18, 2009  Professional Writer
I know what you mean. :) Thank you. :heart:
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