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I look out of my window,
I see the cars passing by,
Each one trying to reach the speed of sound,
And I see the people with their busy lives
No-one seems to have the patience,
For "hello" or "good-bye",
And I remember something my grandpa said,
At least a million times:

"Slow down...wait your turn...
Watch the world as it moves,
And then, my boy, you will learn..."

And I learned that:

The hardest part of living,
Is growing up, and forgiving,
Learning to deal with the strain...
And the hardest part of life,
Is accepting the pain,
We want to deny
The hardest part of life...
Is the living...

Well, my grandpa died,
Just a month ago,
Bless his heart,
He was ninety-seven...years old...
It feels like he taught me,
Everything I know,
And I'll keep them,
With him, in my soul,
I will never...be letting go...

I learned from him that:

The hardest part of living,
Is growing up, and forgiving,
Learning to deal with the strain...
And the hardest part of life,
Is accepting the pain,
We want to deny
The hardest part of life...
Is the living...

It's not the money...
The power, or the control...
It's being among the people,
It's learning so much that your mind blows
My daughter...she is so very much like me...
And I hope that with every day that passes,
I am putting my grandfather into her dreams...
It just...goes to show...
That for a man with no education,
He was the smartest man I've ever known!

The hardest part of living,
Is growing up, and forgiving,
Learning to deal with the strain...
And the hardest part of life,
Is accepting the pain,
We want to deny!
The hardest part of life...!
Is the living...

jlp January 15, 2013
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Our grandfathers try to teach us so much with the little time they have with us, but most of us either fail to learn, or dismiss what they try to teach us as an old man's foolishness.

This piece comes from something my grandfather told me when I was 19, visiting his farm in North Carolina while on military leave. I was tired, stressing as only a service member can, and while I don't remember exactly what began the conversation, I do remember saying that life was so much harder than I thought it would be.

He looked at me and gave a sort of "hmph" kind of chuckle, and he told me "Son, ain life thas hard, is the LIVIN." I should point out that my grandfather had a SERIOUS southern accent. He pointed out to the cornfields that surrounded his house and told me that growing corn was easy, because corn will grow like all things do, but growing it RIGHT, the right amount, the right quality, to get the best price, THAT was hard.

Much of what I have passed on in my over 5 years here, much of what I have taught in my life, comes from my grandfather, because unlike most people, I didn't think he was foolish, and I listened.

It is my hope that these words are a fitting memorial to one of the two best men I've ever known, he was a simple man, and so this piece, like him, is simple.

It is also my hope that this piece, like the man himself, will change your life, because that is what I do, and it is what he did for me, and I will be forever grateful that the last words I ever said to him were "Love you, grandpa."

In honor and loving memory of James Lawrence Perry, Sr.-September 18, 1915-December 9, 2012, you live on in myself and your granddaughter, and in any other children I may have, and in any she may have.

And now you know where the "jlp" I sign every piece comes from. I carry his name, it is my hope that I honor it as well.

Thank you grandpa, for everything.

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:iconbrightstar2:
yes indeed, beautiful tribute to your grandfather, i am sure
he was a wonderful man, as you are :):rose:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Mar 13, 2013  Professional Writer
:blush: I pale in comparison. :heart:
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:iconfrizziekizzie:
This is beautiful Jamie, and I am sorry for your loss :heart: When Opa died, my whole family was devastated, they sound like similar people. Love you :heart:
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 29, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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*DireWolfwere Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you wrapped a whole poem around the idea that living is the hardest part of life. I love it even more where you got your inspiration from, and yet, it doesn't seem like the poem was forced around the idea of your grandfather's phrase. I could even hear it playing as a sorta country song while I read it, though, not sure that's what you intended^^;
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 29, 2013  Professional Writer
It does have a rather country feel and tune to it, I agree. :) I force nothing, I just left it flow and arrange itself as it will. :)
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~dashita-tichou Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I lost someone who was very close to me recently and this piece really reminds me of her because she was kind of like a grandma to me. More than my grandma anyways. Thank you for writing this, and I'm sorry for your loss.
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*That-Krimzon-Stain Jan 29, 2013  Professional Writer
And I for yours. :heart:
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~dashita-tichou Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :hug:
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